albabyDec 26, 2006

hey im very impressed with the story. im hoping that you will upload more stories in the future

iZazuDec 4, 2006

Thanks for downloading my lot and for letting me know that you like it. I appreciate the feedback alot! Hope all your little simmies like it too! Linda

maylynn55Sep 27, 2006

Hi Stella, That is too bad about your computer, I've had that happen to me before, too, so I know how it feels and I really sympathize. I hope it all works out okay and you're able to continue your wonderful story. I'm glad you didn't take offense to my constructive criticism, and offer of help, I was sincere in my offer to proofread for you...I'd be more than happy to do it for you, just let me know if I can be of service. Take care and looking forward to more stories from you...Happy Simming! May

maylynn55Sep 24, 2006

(Hi stellagurl80, Yours is the first story I have ever read and I am VERY impressed!! As I was reading it I kept thinking that maybe you should think about writing books for a living - you're that good. I gave it a 5 ***** rating all the way! Like so many fans before me have asked - are you working on a part 2? I would love to see how everything works out for David & Meadow, and I bet Anabel would love some siblings! Thank you for all the time and effort you put into creating this story and most of all thank you for sharing it with the rest of us! :wub I posted everything in parenthesis under your story as a comment, then I came to investigate your profile and check out your guestbook. I have to agree with Simkitty, below; the only distraction I had while reading your story was that I kept proofreading it as I was reading. I do this with anything I read, I can't help it; but I also would love to be able to edit your story; it�s too bad that it can't be edited after it's been uploaded. That was the only thing that kept it from being pure perfection - I still gave it a 5 star rating though, because I don't feel that points should be taken off in a case like this; it's not like this is a college thesis or a high school essay where your grammar and spelling are part of your grade. If you do another story I would be honored to proof it for you before you upload it. Happy Simming! May

WyomingalSep 21, 2006

In your first story where did you get Thayer's hair?Its cool.

SimkittyAug 29, 2006

Hi. I just finished reading your epic story of Meadow and Anabel Thayer and I have to say it was a very good read. I do agree that it was long, but I don't have a problem with that. In fact, I felt like it left off in the middle of the story. I want to see more of their story. Meadow and David's wedding, David getting a promotion in the Army, Anabel bringing home friends from her new school. What is David's last name? How about more kids for Meadow and David? Also, what about Seth? Does he make any more trouble for Meadow? Do they ever meet Mrs. Green? What if Anabel's half-sibs went to the same private school? So many plot opportunities here. This looks like good Legacy material to me. My only criticism is that you should consider having someone proofread and edit your writing. Can you edit a story you've already uploaded? I wish I could do it for you. I would be so happy to. I see so many great stories that are spoiled (you would say "spoilt"?) by typos, mispelling or bad grammar. Your story is so good that you could easily become a Featured contributer, in my opinion. Congratulations on this wonderful story. I hope we see more of Meadow Thayer-? and her family. Keep up the excellent work. =^..^=

Olga2102Aug 27, 2006

great story