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seelindarunJan 25, 2008

Okay, first I want to say that your writing really is very good, \:wub\: and it's always okay to ignore writing advice, especially if you're already thinking and working on making your stories better in your own way. Let me explain a little better what I meant. You were very successful at showing that the main character knew something wasn't right in the first few frames, like he noticed that her inflection was off; he was confused and nervous; Marla was jittery, and her pupils were strange. Details like these don't point to anything specific, but they convey your idea that something is wrong without giving it away. Later, when she comes to his house for dinner, you don't need to repeat this. We remember it from the first time, and the interaction between the 3 characters during and after dinner is mysterious enough to keep us interested. Just keep in mind that it's okay to make your readers look for meaning in the details you leave behind. Sometimes we'll look harder if you give us fewer hints! \;\) :P

cariadbachDec 30, 2007

\:\) Thanks for taking a look at my latest story, glad you enjoyed\:D

wickedgoddess_athena711Dec 24, 2007

Thank you so much for reading and commenting my story! I really appreciate it. Poor Jane would have been devastated if Riven wasn't saved. Have a Happy holiday! MyHotComments

cashcraftDec 23, 2007

Happy Holidays! Thanks for signing my guestbook and your wonderful comments on my creations. Carolyn \:\)

wickedgoddess_athena711Dec 23, 2007

HI!How are you? How's your holidays? Just dropping by again to say that Chapter 6 of Magician's Hat is up, I'll be honored if you go and check it out. Merry Christmas! MyHotComments

RIDanceDec 20, 2007

Hi there! Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment on part eight of Oasis Island. As always, I really appreciate it. I hope you have a wonderful, safe and happy holiday!\:\) Rach

smp6185Dec 17, 2007

Thanks for the awesome comment on Before The Fall 1.5. The next part should be out either tonight or tomorrow...woot! happy simming

RIDanceDec 12, 2007

hey! just popping in to let you know oasis island 8 is finally posted. cheers! \:\)rach

xImpaledxAngelxDec 1, 2007

Thanks for reading my story and leaving a comment. Part 2 should be out very soon \:D

wickedgoddess_athena711Dec 1, 2007

Hi! I'm dropping by once again, it's December 1 in where I live and people here are getting crazy greeting each other merry christmas already, Christmas here seems to start in Christ the King and end in 3 kings \:D \:D (or the epiphany forgot the spelling!)here! So, Merry Christmas to you! By the way, part 5 of the magician's hat is up!Hope you'll check it out when you have the time. \;\)

Elena.Nov 29, 2007

Hey! Thank you for sticking with Letta's story! I am glad you still like it and thank you for your nice comment!\:wub\: I'm flattered that you think my work is awesome - thank u once more! Have a great day! \:wub\:

wickedgoddess_athena711Nov 24, 2007

Hi leifofdel! Thank you so much for checking out chapter 4 of the magician's hat! Your comment truly inspires me! \:wub\: \:wub\:

DirtdevillNov 14, 2007

Hi, leifofdel! thanks for commenting on my Womrat screenshot, it's verry much appriciated! Have a nice day!\:wub\:

Redkandies03Nov 14, 2007

\:D part 3 is up and waiting for approval.\:D Thank you again

Elena.Nov 13, 2007

Hello! Thank you so much for reading my story and taking the time to comment, I appreciate it so much \:wub\: \:rah\: Have a great week! \:rah\:

wickedgoddess_athena711Nov 11, 2007

thank you so much again for checking out and commenting my story! \:wub\: I truly appreciate it. I've got MTS2,TSR, insiminator and pc-sims to thank for most of the CC. I'll be sure to notify you when the next one is up. \;\)

wickedgoddess_athena711Nov 10, 2007

hi leifofdel! ! Just wanted to stop by and say that Chapter 3 of Magician's hat is up. Hope you'll check it out. \;\)

Elena.Nov 7, 2007

Hello! Thank you very much for your comment on my story, glad you like it. \:wub\: \:rah\: Well, I am working on the second part, I have half of it finished \:D Stay tuned \:P

wickedgoddess_athena711Nov 4, 2007

hi leifofdel! thank you for reading and commenting the 2nd part of the story. \:wub\: I'll tell you when the 3rd par is up.\;\)

Redkandies03Nov 3, 2007

\:\) Thank you for taking the time out to read and comment on my story Eye Witness part 2 should be up shortly\:\) you'll have to read it to find out who got shot or if someone got shot

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